以下是小编收集整理的关于雅思写作议论文核心例题【九篇】，仅供参考，希望能够帮助到大家。
【篇1】雅思写作议论文核心例题
用英语美文来写作文会让你的作文文采更出色哦，快用小本本记下来把。
1、All that is beautiful poems and passages of life things do not change;we change.sell your clothes and keep your thoughts.
万物不变，是我们在变。你的衣服可以卖掉，但要保留你的思想
2、Don’t wait to be lonely, to recognize the value of a friend.
不要等到寂寞了，才明白朋友的价值。
3、I sit at my window this morning where the world like a passer-by stops for a moment， nods to me and goes.
我今晨坐在窗前，世界如一个路人似的，停留了一会，向我点点头又走过去了。
4、Man is a born child， his power is the power of growth.
人是一个初生的孩子，他的力量，就是生长的力量。
5、Once we dreamt that we were strangers. We wake up to find that we were dear to each other.
有一次，我们梦见大家都是不相识的。我们醒了，却知道我们原是相亲相爱的。
6、Power said to the world， “You are mine.” The world kept it prisoner on her throne. Love said to the world， “I am thine.” The world gave it the freedom of her house.
权势对世界说道：“你是我的。”世界便把权势囚禁在她的宝座下面。爱情对世界说道：“我是你的。”世界便给予爱情以在它屋内来往的自由。
7、Remember: Friendship is like wine, it gets better as it grows older.
记得：友谊像醇酒，越久越浓。
8、The mist， like love， plays upon the heart of the hills and bring out surprises of beauty.
雾，象爱情一样，在山峰的心上游戏，生出种.种美丽的变幻。
9、The scabbard is content to be dull when it protects the keenness of the sword.
刀鞘保护刀的锋利，它自己则满足于它的迟钝。
10、These are times of finer houses,but more broken homes;
现在的住房越来越精致，但我们也有了更多破碎的家庭;
11、think it over...
好好想想……
12、we have much more food,but less nutrition;
我们有了更多的食物，但所能得到的营养却越来越少了来源.
13、we have multiplied out possessions,but reduced out values;
我们拥有的财富倍增，但其价值却减少了。
14、we reached the moon and came back,but we find it troublesome to cross our own street and meet our neighbors;
我们可以往返月球，但却难以迈出一步去亲近我们的左邻右舍。
【篇2】雅思写作议论文核心例题
窗
Random Thoughts on the Window
钱钟书
By Qian Zhongshu
又是春天，窗子可以常开了。春天从窗外进来，人在屋子里坐不住，就从门里出去。
It is spring again and the window can be left open as often as one would like. As spring comes in through the windows, so people -- unable to bear staying inside any longer -- go outdoors.
不过屋子外的春天太贱了!到处是阳光，不像射破屋里阴深的那样明亮;到处是给太阳晒得懒洋洋的风，不像搅动屋里沉闷的那样有生气。
The spring outside, however, is much too cheap, for the sun shines on everything, and so does not seem as bright as that which shoots into the darkness of the house. Outside the sun-sloshed breeze blows everywhere, but it is not so lively as that which stirs the gloominess inside the house.
就是鸟语，也似乎琐碎而单薄，需要屋里的寂静来做衬托。我们因此明白，春天是该镶嵌在窗子里看的，好比画配了框子。
Even the chirping of the birds sounds so thin and broken that the quietness of the house is needed to set it off. It seems that spring was always meant to be put behind a windowpane for show, just like a picture in a frame.
同时，我们悟到，门和窗有不同的意义。当然，门是造了让人出进的。但是，窗子有时也可作为进出口用，譬如小偷或小说里私约的情人就喜欢爬窗子。
At the same time it also becomes clear that the door has a different significance from the window. Of course, doors were made for people to pass through; but a window can also sometimes serve as an entrance or as an exit, and is used as such by thieves and by lovers in novels.
所以窗子和门的根本分别，决不仅是有没有人进来出去。若据赏春一事来看，我们不妨这样说：有了门，我们可以出去;有了窗，我们可以不必出去。
In fact the fundamental difference between a door and a window has nothing to do with them being either entrances or exits. When it comes to the admiration of spring, it could be put this way: a door makes it possible for one to go out, whereas a window makes it possible for one not to have to.
窗子打通了大自然和人的隔膜，把风和太阳逗引进来，使屋子里也关着一部分春天，让我们安坐了享受，无需再到外面去找。
A window helps to pull down the partition between man and nature. It leads breezes and sunlight in, and keeps part of the spring in the house. It allows one to sit and enjoy the spring in peace, and makes it unnecessary to go looking for it outside.
【篇3】雅思写作议论文核心例题
雅思写作中的保证词组啦，用上它不用怕写作分会低于6月。
1 随着经济的快速发展 with the rapid development of economy
2 提高人民的生活水平improve people’s living standard
3 先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology
4 面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges
5 人们普遍认为 it is commonly believed/ recognized that …
6 社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development
7 引起了广泛的公共关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention
8 不可否认 it is undeniable that…/ there is no denying that
9 热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion/ debate
10 有争议性的问题 a controversial issue
11 完全不同的观点 a totally different argument
12 一些人….而另一些人… some people … while others …
13 就我而言/ 就个人而言 as far as I am concerned/ personally
14 就…达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on …
15 有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons
16 双方的论点 argument on both sides
17 发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in
18 对…必不可少 be indispensable to
19 正如言语所说 as the proverb goes
20 … 也不例外 …. be no exception
21 对…产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects on …
22 利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages
23 导致，引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in
24 复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon
25 责任感/成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement
26 竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation
27 开阔眼界 widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision
28 学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills
29 经济/ 心理负担 financial burden/ psychological burden
30 考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration
31 从另一个角度 from another perspective
32 做出共同努力 make joint efforts
33 对… 有益 be beneficial/ conductive to ….
34 为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society
35 打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for ….
36 综合素质 comprehensive quality
37 无可非议 blameless/ beyond reproach
38 无法想象 beyond imagination/ unimaginable
39 致力于/ 投身于 be committed/ devoted to ….
40 应当承认 admittedly
41 不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty
42 满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of ….
43 可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information
44 宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources
45 网络 the Internet
46 方便快捷 convenient and efficient
47 在人类生活的方面面 in all aspects of human life
48 环保的 environmentally friendly
49 社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress
50 科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology
51 对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
52 支持前/ 后种观点的人 people/ those in favor of the former/ latter opinion
53 有/提供如下理由/证据 have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence
54 在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree/ in some way
55 理论与实践相结合 integrate theory with practice
56 …必然趋势 an irresistible trend of ….
57 日益激烈的社会竞争 an increasingly fierce social competition
58 眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest
59 长远利益 interest in the long run
60 …有其自身的优缺点 … has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages
61 扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
62 取其精髓，去其糟粕 take the essence and discard the dregs
63 对…有害 do harm to/ be harmful to/ be detrimental to
64 交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information
65 跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with/ catch up with/ keep abreast with the latest development of …
66 采取有效措施来…. Take effective measures to do sth
67 …的健康发展 the healthy development of ….
68 有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides. No garden without weeds.
69 对…观点因人而异 Views on… vary from person to person
70 重视 attach great importance to ….
71 社会地位 social status
72 把时间和经历放在…上 focus time and energy on …
73 扩大知识面 expand one’s scope of knowledge
74 身心两方面 both physically and mentally
75 有直接/间接关系 be directly/ indirectly related to ….
76 提出折中建议 set forth a compromise proposal
77 可取代think的词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that
78 缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden
79 优先考虑/发展… give (top) priority to sth
80 与…比较 compared with …/ in comparison with
81 相反 in/ by contrast; on the contrary
82 代替 replace/ substitute/ take the place of
83 经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis
84 提供就业机会 offer job opportunities
85 社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress
86 毫无疑问 undoubtedly/ there is no doubt that
87 增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutual understanding
88 充分利用 make full use of/ make the most use of
89 承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure
90 保障社会的稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society
91 更多地强调 put more emphasis on….
92 适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society
93 实现梦想 realize one’s dream/ make one’s dream come true
94 主要的理由列举如下 The main reasons are listed as follows:
95 首先 at first, firstly, to begin with
96 其次 secondly, in the second place
97 再次 besides, in addition, additionally, moreover, furthermore
98 最后 finally, last but not the least, above all, lastly
99 总而言之 all in all, to sum up, in summary, in a word
100 我们还有很长的路要走 we still have a long way to go
【篇4】雅思写作议论文核心例题
[经典例题一]
direction: for this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic “vacation,long or short?” .in some universities, there are three short vacations each school year, while in other two longer vacations separate the two semesters. there are people who favor the short vacation and also people preferring the long one.
explain your viewpoint in no less than 100 words.
[题型分析]
该作文题目属于情景作文类题型。该类作文要求考生根据作文题目中所规定的情景提纲应用恰当的文体写出所要求的文章。考生应该先根据题目中所给出的情景确定文章的中心思想或者主题，然后围绕确定的主题进行讨论，利用论据进行论证，发表自己的看法。简单的说，就是一个“立论”和“论证”的过程。该类作文题比较平凡，只要考生能够总结出一套自己写议论文的模版，在考场场不论碰到任何题目都能应对自如。
[范文]
some people favor long vacations because they can have enough time to do things that cannot be finished within a short period. during a long vacation, they may make a complicated experiment, carry out an involved investigation or go to a faraway place for some necessary field work. taking a full time job to earn money for one or two months is another benefit the long vacation provides and sometimes a good academic thesis with a considerable length needs a long vacation.
those who prefer short vacations also have understandable reasons. for two or three weeks" rest is adequate for students to refresh themselves without forgetting the lessons that are to be continued next semester. short vacations also mean to rest three times a school year and short semesters. to study in this way is easier than to study for a long exhausting time with many courses and lessons crammed together.
one the whole, either long or short vacation has its advantages and disadvantages. what matters is how to make use of it.
[经典例题二]
directions :
a. title : good health
b. time limit :40 minutes
c. word limit : 120-150 words ( not including the given opening sentence)
d. your composition should be based on the outline below and should start with the
given opening sentence : “the desire for good health is universal. ”
e. your composition should be written neatly on the answer sheet.
outline:
1. importance of good health
2. ways to keep fit
3. my own practices
[题型分析]
提纲式题型是pets-4级中最常见的作文题型。在提纲作文中，为考生提供好了要点式的写作提纲，将考生的作文范围限定在一定的主题和讨论附近。该类题型要求考生紧扣题目主题，根据提纲提示的思路和要点展开段落。
提纲式作文相对主题句作文来说更加灵活，这就要求考生有更强的审题本领，能够将题干中所给的提纲信息准确地续写为一整篇文章。但是相对于图表作文和情景作文来说，对审题立意的要求又相对减弱，考生只需要根据给定的提纲进行发挥即可。总的来说，还是考察考生用英文进行论证的本领。
[范文]
good health
wherever you are and whatever you do, staying healthy is always important. with the improvement of our living standards, people are attaching more and more importance to their health. we students can" t keep the high study efficiency without good. health. the same thing is true with workers, scientists and doctors.
in my opinion, good diet and exercises are two major ways to keep healthy. the food we eat every day must be rational and should include meat, vegetables, eggs, and fruit. it is important to drink water every day and not to get addicted to drinking coffee or some other soft drinks. ex-ercising every day is also essential for us to stay healthy. we can ride bicycles, play tennis or swim. of course we don" t need to exhaust ourselves. we should plan our physical exercises according to our actual condition. an hour a day is enough.
as a university student, i have much free time to do exercises. l usually play badminton and tennis. but sometimes i am lazy and do not exercise for all kinds of excuses, such as cold weather and exams. i must correct it. i am also careful with my diet. in a way, keeping healthy is not very hard, if you just take it seriously.
【篇5】雅思写作议论文核心例题
雅思议论文写作论据：To Play, or to Compete，供考生们参考，以下是详细内容。
To Play, or to Compete?
1. Organized sports activities bring damage rather than benefits to children both physically and psychologically.
2. Physically, as they are still at the stage of developing bodies, hard exercises and tough playing will be inappropriate for them.
3. Psychologically, winning and losingthe keynote of adult life --- may mean too heavy a burden for children who should have fun and enjoy the game at that age.
4. The primary goal of a professional athlete winning is not appropriate for children. Their goal should be having fun, learning, and being with friends.
5. Children will benefit more from those programs emphasizing fitness, self-esteem, cooperation, sportsmanship, and individual performance.
6. Besides physical hazards and anxieties, competitive sports pose psychological dangers for children.
以上就是为大家整理的雅思议论文写作论据：To Play, or to Compete，非常实用。最后，预祝大家在雅思考试中取得好成绩!
1.议论文写作论据：知错就改
2.恒心议论文写作论据精选
3.议论文写作事实论据
4.中考语文写作议论文论据
5.中考作文议论文论据写作素材宽容
6.中考作文议论文之论据写作素材解读
7.中考作文议论文之论据写作素材
8.中考作文议论文之论据写作素材：实践
9.中考作文议论文的论据写作素材
10.中考作文议论文论据写作之素材：积累
【篇6】雅思写作议论文核心例题
PETS四级写作经典例题
[经典例题一]Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic “VACATION,LONG OR SHORT?” .In some universities, there are three short vacations each school year, while in other two longer vacations separate the two semesters. There are people who favor the short vacation and also people preferring the long one.
Explain your viewpoint in no less than 100 words.
[题型分析]
该作文题目属于情景作文类题型。该类作文要求考生根据作文题目中所规定的情景提纲应用恰当的文体写出所要求的文章。考生应该先根据题目中所给出的`情景确定文章的中心思想或者主题，然后围绕确定的主题进行讨论，利用论据进行论证，发表自己的看法。简单的说，就是一个“立论”和“论证”的过程。该类作文题比较平凡，只要考生能够总结出一套自己写议论文的模版，在考场场不论碰到任何题目都能应对自如。
[范文]
Some people favor long vacations because they can have enough time to do things that cannot be finished within a short period. During a long vacation, they may make a complicated experiment, carry out an involved investigation or go to a faraway place for some necessary field work. Taking a full time job to earn money for one or two months is another benefit the long vacation provides And sometimes a good academic thesis with a considerable length needs a long vacation.
Those who prefer short vacations also have understandable reasons. For two or three weeks" rest is adequate for students to refresh themselves without forgetting the lessons that are to be continued next semester. Short vacations also mean to rest three times a school year and short semesters. To study in this way is easier than to study for a long exhausting time with many courses and lessons crammed together.
One the whole, either long or short vacation has its advantages and disadvantages. What matters is how to make use of it.
[经典例题二]
DIRECTIONS :
A. Title : GOOD HEALTH
B. Time limit :40 minutes
C. Word limit : 120-150 words ( not including the given opening sentence)
D. Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the
given opening sentence : “The desire for good health is universal. ”
E. YOur composition should be written neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
OUTLINE:
1. Importance of good health
2. Ways to keep fit
3. My own practices
[题型分析]
提纲式题型是PETS-4级中最常见的作文题型。在提纲作文中，为考生提供好了要点式的写作提纲，将考生的作文范围限定在一定的主题和讨论附近。该类题型要求考生紧扣题目主题，根据提纲提示的思路和要点展开段落。
提纲式作文相对主题句作文来说更加灵活，这就要求考生有更强的审题本领，能够将题干中所给的提纲信息准确地续写为一整篇文章。但是相对于图表作文和情景作文来说，对审题立意的要求又相对减弱，考生只需要根据给定的提纲进行发挥即可。总的来说，还是考察考生用英文进行论证的本领。
[范文]
GOOD HEALTH
Wherever you are and whatever you do, staying healthy is always important. With the improvement of our living standards, people are attaching more and more importance to their health. We students can" t keep the high study efficiency without good. health. The same thing is true with workers, scientists and doctors.
In my opinion, good diet and exercises are two major ways to keep healthy. The food we eat every day must be rational and should include meat, vegetables, eggs, and fruit. It is important to drink water every day and not to get addicted to drinking coffee or some other soft drinks. Ex-ercising every day is also essential for us to stay healthy. We can ride bicycles, play tennis or swim. Of course we don" t need to exhaust ourselves. We should plan our physical exercises according to our actual condition. An hour a day is enough.
As a university student, I have much free time to do exercises. l usually play badminton and tennis. But sometimes I am lazy and do not exercise for all kinds of excuses, such as cold weather and exams. I must correct it. I am also careful with my diet. In a way, keeping healthy is not very hard, if you just take it seriously.
【篇7】雅思写作议论文核心例题
Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Others say that they shouldnt. Which do you think is good practice.
One of the topics in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their adult children. My answer is the question is that it is better for them not to.
Firstly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life whereas the young prefer noises, activities and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped.
Secondly, people of different generations have different views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on matters ranging from minor domestic matters to national and international issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young.
Last but not the least, adult children, like their parents, love independence and freedom, but their parents still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts.
【篇8】雅思写作议论文核心例题
雅思写作典型例题16道
1. Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students how to judge right and wrong and how to behave well. Some say that teachers should only teach students about academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 教育：p.45, no.20;21;
2. Some people think the university education is to prepare students for employment, others think it has other function. discuss and give your opinion.
3. Some people argue that teaching children of different abilities together benefits all of them. Others believe that intelligent children should be taught separately and given special treatment. Discuss both views and how do you think about it?
4. Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and uses up the world"s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?飞机的利弊
5.It is now possible to perform everyday tasks, such as bank transaction, shopping or even office works, without meeting people face to face. What are the effects it may have on individuals and the society as a whole?科技的影响 p.76, 6;
6.With the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, less people tend to write letters. Some people even think the skill of writing letters will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree? How important do you think letter writing is? 科技的影响
7.Some believes that cultural traditions will be destroyed by the money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others think it is the only way to save these cultural traditions. Discuss both views and show your own opinion.旅游的影响
8.Some people suggest when people move to a new country they should accept the new culture as their own，rather than have the separate minority groups which has their own different cultures. To what extent do you agree?cultural exchange vs. cultural identity
9.The best way to solve the world"s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent you agree or disagree?环境类话题p.52, no.31; p.54, 33
10.Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since the computer technology is so advanced that the Internet and computer can replace them. To what extend do you agree or disagree?市政基础：图书馆问题 p. 43, no.16 建筑：p.77, 7 and 9
11.Nowadays some people like to give help or donate to local communication directly where someone need help. Other people prefer to give money to national or international organizations. What is your opinion?社会问题：人际互助
12.The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences and only governmental actions can solve the problem. Do you agree or disagree?社会问题：住房与政府
13.Some people think that government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists (eg. painters, musicians, poets), while some others think it is a waste of money. What is your opinion? 文艺的价值与资助(政府)
14.Some consider that history is little or no use to us. Others believe that studying history helps us to know the present. Discuss their views and give your own opinion.历史的价值p.37, 8
15.媒体话题：讲义p.40, No. 12;13;
16.广告话题：c6-t1;讲义 p.49, no.25;
雅思技巧：雅思写作范文怎样合理利用
在雅思考试中，很多考生由于对作文的话题不熟悉导致没有话可说，甚至有些学生由于词汇量不够而限制了表达自己的观点，因此很多学生将雅思写作范文当做救命稻草，日夜苦背，我们承认，多背几篇雅思范文确实可以帮助我们提高词汇量，也能帮助我们提高写作 水平，但是一味的只知道原模原样的背，不但浪费了考生宝贵的复习时间，收效也甚微，那不原模原样的背，该怎么背?雅思写作技巧的掌握对于考试还是很有帮助的，希望大家能够总是雅思写作辅导的内容。
一篇好的作文，不在于他有多么华丽的辞藻，而在与她的结构，如果你的文章也像范文一样条理清晰，结构严谨，逻辑严密，那怎么 可能会得不到高分呢，所以，原模原样的被范文，不如仔细的研究范文的文章结构，看范文中是怎么安排段落的，段落之间以及句子之 间是怎么连接在一起的，运用了哪些衔接手段等等。如果你的基础很差，语言能力很低，不妨通过多分析几篇范文，来明白写作的框架 和机构，然后选择几篇范文熟练背诵之后将他们改写成自己的话，如果你的目标为5分，那么备考时就以一定要注重题意的理解，写作基 本模板的训练和简单句式的练习，尤其注意常见单词的词性正确使用。
另外，在如果你可以在短短的30分钟内，根据给定的话题快速的把你的观点条理清晰的陈述出来，再加上丰富准确的词汇，多样的句 式结构，以及你独特的见解，那么一定可以吸引考官的注意力，让他不得不给你一个高分数。所以，背范文不光要被词汇，还要学会鉴 赏好文章的结构。
雅思技巧：写作七大语法致命伤
雅思写作语法致命伤1. 双谓语错句
e.g. For those under 26， there were 80% students study for career.
There be句型属于双谓语错句高发句型，因为句中的be动词已经是谓语，而句子后面的动词通常是定语从句中的成分，故不能作为主句中的谓语。例句中同时出现了“were”和“study”，根据上面的分析，were应该是谓语，而study for career应该是定语从句，因此，例句应修正改成：
For those under 26， there were 80% students who studied for career. 或者For those under 26， there were 80% students studying for career.
又如：Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives.应改成：
Causes for this phenomenon are comprehensive but the major reasons contributing/which contribute to this problem can be identified from three perspectives.
雅思写作语法致命伤2. 句子不完整
e.g. The most popular kind of transport was by road.
句中主语是the most popular kind of transport，谓语动词(系动词)是was， 而by road按照语法应该是方式状语，此句缺乏表语。应改成：
The most popular kind of transport was road.
又如：Many factories in order to get more profits， which made waste water and waste gas.
去除目的状语“in order to get more profits”和非限制性定语从句“which made waste water and waste gas”， 剩下的是many factories， 不能作为一个句子。根据此句想表达的意思，应改为：
Many factories in order to get more profits made waste water and waste gas.
雅思写作语法致命伤3. 主系表结构使用错误
e.g. We are impossible to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.
此句的主干结构是：we are impossible“我们是不可能”，表意不对。这种表达在英语中对应的句型是：It is…for…to…， 所以应该改成：
It is impossible for us to make any progress without correcting the mistakes.
类似的错误例句还有：People are very convenient to get information on the Internet. His profession is a teacher.
雅思写作语法致命伤4. 情态动词后的动词原形和动名词的使用出错
e.g. Another equally vital point to be considered is that building them may costs much money and energy.
这种错误可能是笔误，在雅思作文中偶尔出现不至于扣分，但是通篇都是这样的错误，那么肯定是有影响的。
e.g. Another point to be discussed is that more time spending on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.
“花更多时间在电脑上”这个动词短语作为主语应该要用动名词形式：
Another point to be discussed is that spending more time on computers is harmful to children’s mental health.
雅思写作语法致命伤5. 标点符号用错
e.g. As far as I am concerned， people should take exercise and relax themselves on a weekly basis. Because it offers great opportunities to release their stress.
Because引导的句子做原因状语从句，既然是从句，那么前面就不应该使用句号使其独立成句，而应该改成逗号，because首字母小写。
雅思写作语法致命伤6. 词性使用错误
e.g. One possible solution is using the new energy to instead of the traditional energy.
Instead of是介词，而这里构成to do(不定式)，只能用动词。因此，可改为：
One possible solution is using the new energy to replace the traditional energy.
e.g. Nowadays， some students study many subjects in university， which leads to that they suffer great mental pressure.
Lead to中to是介词，后面不能直接加句子，因此可在leads to后加一名词，构成同位语从句：
Nowadays， some students study many subjects in university， which leads to the fact that they suffer great mental pressure. 或Nowadays， some students study many subjects in university， which makes them suffer great mental pressure.
雅思写作语法致命伤7. 从句的误用和滥用
e.g. The reason why I assert it is necessary for government to provide better education and health care for rural areas because it can ensure all citizens to have access to them.
“why…rural areas”在句中作the reason的定语，固定句式“the reason why…is that…”why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句连用，气势磅礴，这就是所谓的高分句型。
e.g. In this essay， I will discuss what those， who are two kinds of people in this topic， are how to think and how to choose. 实再迂回婉转，不知所云。
除了上面所列其中7类语法错误情况以外，常见的雅思写作语法错误还包括：主谓一致，时态，特殊句型(如倒装句，强调句等)使用错误以及逻辑问题等。
雅思技巧：雅思写作多元化如何实现
1. 词汇语法多样性的体现
1). 词性的多样性
有调查指出，中国学生在作文中最常出现的词性为动词，因为我们脑中时刻紧记着以前语文老师要求的只有用动词才能写出生动的文章，才能体现我们的博览群书。然而英语中却不尽然。通过对大多高分范文的分析，不难发现，除了动词词组的运用，各种的名词的使用更得考官的青睐，更能体现外国人的文风。拿小作文的发展趋势做例子，大家都知道增加、降低等动词的表达，如increase steadily, decrease sharply等，但转换一种方式用名词的形式表达，就更显得多样了,如experience a steady increase, undergo a sharp decrease。而如“surface”一词，学生经常只会用它的名词用法“......的表面”，却从来不用它的动词形式。如果你留心原版杂志和阅读材料,它的动词用法无处不在。例如“The fact of his plan surfaced”这里的“surface”就相当于“appear”。所以不管什么词性，只要用了不能的表达方法，其结果都是不同的。当然是指正确的表达方法。
2). 同义词多样性
在写作中，如果一个相同的词在250字的文中出现了不下三次，那么作为学生自己，也会觉得自己的文章没有可看性，更别提考官，可见此学生语言功底一般，又怎么拿得到高分。而如果一篇文章，关于同个词却有三四中表达方法，无疑给这篇文章加分不少。其实同义词也是展现一个学生英语水平的一个媒介。中国学生最常用的形容词就是good，不管是修饰什么名词，用上再说，殊不知这已经给这篇文章打了个相对低的起评分，所以如何来表达不同的“好”呢?我们就可以用excellent、marvellous、gorgeous、splendid、wonderful等。再如不要一想到“越来越多”就用“more and more”尝试用“an increasing number”这样不同的词来表达，势必会给平淡的文章增添亮点。
3). 句式结构的多样性
用丰富多彩的句型，也是雅思写作能得高分的标准之一。例如有这样一个句型：“If we don"t recognize the...”，我们是否可以替换为：“Failure to recognize...”，再如 “sth. happened in .”，我们也可以替换为“1998 saw sth happening.”，这样显得更加的地道。此处还推荐学生能用不同的从句写出漂亮的句子，为文章加分。当然，这并不是意味着整篇文章都是复合句或并列句，如果能很好的做到长短句结合，使文章通顺连贯，也是能得到考官喜欢的。
2. 几点建议
在简单介绍了词汇语法多样性的体现后，我将提出几点建议，促进考生在备考中做好准备。
1). 做好词汇短语的积累工作。很多考生有这样一个误区，他们认为只要背了某些参考书上所谓的模板，再积累些论据，写作的问题就迎刃而解了，殊不知，却得到了本文开始的结果。当然这里的积累并非死记硬背，而是通过将一个单词的不同形式，以及其同义表达等放在一起记忆就事半功倍。若遇到一个新词，就要在脑中搜寻它的相关信息，这样一来，就能在考试这么短的时间中马上浮现了。但是一次的记忆是远远不够的，所以适时的重复记忆也非常重要。
2). 多看高分范文，并对其中的词汇句型多样性进行总结。考生在备考过程中看范文时往往只是从整体上学习了其论据的安排，而忽略了细节的词汇句型的运用，所以教师在上课时也要合理安排时间，将一部分用在对其的讲解上。学生最好准备一本笔记本专门用做记录好词好句和其转换形式。
3). 加强练习。经常有学生问，作文提高是不是只要多写几篇就可以了，其实答案是否定的。这里所指的加强练习是在一定的基础之上的，即学生已经基本掌握了雅思写作的各项要求。那么这样练习才能有的放矢。通过几次的练习，能检查出学生多样性的掌握情况，并对症下药，了解不足处，在真正考试中能突围而出。
【篇9】雅思写作议论文核心例题
经常在作文批改中发现很多学生对于议论文观点会给出一些很纠结的支持理由，然后再加上一大段纠结的文字解释，看过后经常产生不知从何下笔修改的感觉。要说句子的正确，结构的多样性，都达到了一定的水平，但全文的逻辑性以及整体感却有所欠缺。出现这种问题的主要原因还是由于在思考过程中，中外不同思维方式所产生的不同结果所致。
西方语言的思维方式是直线型的思维方式，谋篇布局原则通常为：从一般到具体，从概括到举例，从整体到个体，从观点到案例。而中国考生习惯于螺旋型思维方式。从侧面说，兜圈子或旁敲侧击，先偏后正，由次到主，采用先摆事实，再讲道理的归纳式逻辑结构。所以本应在段首简洁明了给出的主题句却变成了有1，2，3...层意思，让人产生无限遐想，却不知作者要表达目的的复杂结构。
英语语言注重逻辑结构的完整以及各构成部分之间逻辑关系在形式上的体现，注重整个论述的有效性，而大部分考生只注重整体的表达效果，而不善于分析事物的内部结构，不关心形式上的完整及各部分之间的关系是否严谨，词和句子的意义常靠上下文来理解，对每篇文章只有2-3分钟就要给出分数的考官来说，经常觉得不知所云。也就是常出现的缺乏句与句之间关联词的现象。
1.雅思议论文写作方法
2.雅思写作议论文核心例题
3.有关雅思议论文写作论据总结
4.高中议论文写作要点
5.高中议论文的写作方法
6.英语议论文的写作诀窍
7.中考议论文的写作指导
8.科技议论文写作思路
9.议论文写作论据：知错就改
10.高中议论文写作指要
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